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Heart Thrust......a dodoitsu

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steavenr
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Heart thrust, my beloved flame
Lights my core with passion's fire
Come to me my love I pray
Leave not fervor’s side

© Copyright 2004 Steaven R Snow - All Rights Reserved
Duncan
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1 posted 01-27-2004 08:14 PM       View Profile for Duncan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Duncan

Cool write Steaven.  Interesting form, I had to look it up, never seen it before.  
Snow
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desert flower looking for rain


2 posted 01-27-2004 08:27 PM       View Profile for Snow   Email Snow   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Snow's Home Page   View IP for Snow

i haven't seen many write a dodoitsu. it became a favorite form of mine a few months ago.

nicely done.

"...why does my skeleton pursue me
if my soul has fallen away?"
~p.neruda

Patricia
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3 posted 01-27-2004 08:55 PM       View Profile for Patricia   Email Patricia   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Patricia

I am learning from the many styles you are trying on this evening.  Perhaps you have worn them before or are they new to you as well?  Either way, my friend, your poems suit me just beautifully.  

Patricia

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Duncan, thank you but you can find this and other cool forms on http://members.optushome.com.au/kazoom/poetry/dodoitsu.html

Snow, glad you liked it…glad you have several that you will hopefully share

Pat, they are all new to me…just trying to expand my horizons…since I have so little inspiration from my sheltered, well-ordered life, I need something to bring variety to my writing styles
Saunni
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This is an interesting piece of work. Wish I could say I could write that way... but I can't! Great write here!

Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain.

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(sigh) Awwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, this sounds like such a wonderful poetic form, yay, I should try it sometime, may your heart always beat smooth like wild honey, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Steaven, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

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just out of reach


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Like they often say "you learn something new everyday." I have never even heard of this form before. Thankyou steavenr for sharing this lovely write with us. Chris

"At one glance
I love you
With a thousand hearts."


— Mihri Hatun, Turkish poet



    

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passionate write!
jaicie114
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On the edge of forever


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steavenr...ditto on not knowing what the form is...but, I sincerely think this would be a smashing verse in any form!  Thanks!

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

A Romantic Heart
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Hot! Hot! Hot! steve you are on fire!!!!!

Passionate

~ARH
love and hugs!

Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH

Seymour Tabin
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steavenr
Unfamiliar with the form but enjoyed the write.
steavenr
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Saunni, thank you, but I dare say you sell yourself short.  This was but an exercise I gave myself to exercise my writing skills.

Noah, thank you and PLEASE do try it…that would be great!

Nightshade, thank you…it was new for me too

J.Samm, thank you for noticing

jaicie, as always, you are far too kind…thank you

ARH, coming from you, I count that high praise indeed

Seymour, thank you kindly
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thanks for the link...the write is cool!
iliana
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Steavenur -- what a gorgeous exercise it is!  Thanks for the beautiful reading and for the link!     .....jo
Artic Wind
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enjoyed


ARCTIC WIND
 
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