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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2004-01-27 07:42 AM



Night Wash


sheets of
lacy white
neatly
fold themselves
on shelves
of pine needles
as the moon
gently hangs
it’s laundry
out to dry



© Copyright 2004 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-01-27 08:06 AM


1slick_lady
Elegant

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just out of reach
2 posted 2004-01-27 09:54 AM



passing shadows
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3 posted 2004-01-27 12:29 PM


good to see you're back to your old awesome self again
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4 posted 2004-01-27 04:41 PM


OneSlick~
My GAWD ... this is some kinda PURTY !!!!!
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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5 posted 2004-01-27 04:42 PM


What lovely imagery....love this Helen!
Hugs~

~ Is that love I see in your eyes...
  or merely a reflection of mine? ~

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6 posted 2004-01-27 05:05 PM


so neat...so wonderfully descriptive...loved it
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where the wild flowers grow
7 posted 2004-01-27 07:30 PM


You're just too damn good.
Saunni
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8 posted 2004-01-27 09:35 PM


Shaking my head here... I really think you should come out with your own line of cards, greeting card! You never lack the words and your talent is overwhelming! Great write!

Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain.

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9 posted 2004-01-27 11:17 PM




(sigh) Awwwwwwwww, I love the imagery shining in this, sweet friend, God Bless You, this made me smile, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

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