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I'm Falling
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I'm Falling |
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Fire Fairy Junior Member
since 2003-10-22
Posts 43Australia |
There are no lyrics to be sung tonight... each word creating a moment of dripping emotion Hanging in the air A tear drop of brittle teeth Stuck in the throat of conciousness No words... Just haunting melodies carried on the backs of black birds to the destination unknown Lonliness is a self created manifest of illusion Searching for something beyond the self to make me smile Sunburnt memories leave me cold Silver moon magic leaves old breath on my mind Whispering a beautiful breeze to my breast Left there to hang in waiting For the slightest touch to send ripples of electricity through me Then fading... Leaving me to fall addicted to addiction A criminal of desire Craving Needing Wanting Why do you have to set me free? I am an old clock who has realised that time means nothing mans creations deny anything real Defying time with thoughts of you I'm waiting- if time is an illusion- in an endless orbit of polarised nothingness Waiting to hear the tone of my phone with your plea for me on the other end I'm f a l l i n g I've sacrificed my bliss for you! Craving another and taking from a conditional source The mind is evil The heart is sore It all seemed so beautiful before |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Interesting write. I didn't want to see it "falling" off the page without more reading it.  Chris"At one glance |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
nice...I can relate well |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
Those are reeeaaaally powerful words there...I'm glad I read this one.  ~sky Hold on, if you feel like letting go |
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Iron Wolf Junior Member
since 2004-01-20
Posts 23 |
That was all really good, deep and emotive, good job. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Why do you have to set me free? If one turns that question into a statement - the answer is right there. I really enjoyed this piece. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Charlotte~ You have woven a creatively lovely piece~ Enjoyed so very much the read~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big angel hugs) Oh Charlotte, I'm so happy you're back, yay! (does happy dance) I hope you had the most wonderful time in Sydney, yay, I dream of going there to hug a kangaroo, God Bless You, this is a beautiful comeback, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Charlotte, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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