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Morning Dew
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Morning Dew |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050
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Morning Dew As points of light a glimmer trapped in sparkling beads of dew Fall slowly down my window they create a clearer view Revealing my reflection in a frozen gaze of time These teardrops of a new day trickling down along with mine This melted condensation which now weeps onto my sill Epitomize the heartache of a life so unfulfilled A life sans all tomorrows but for memories of pain A past so omnipresent, there is no chance of escape I’ve wallowed in the shadows of this sorrow evermore I’ve hid from every truth that I no longer can ignore I’m looking for an answer I’m not sure I want to hear To see what is invisible is vision that I fear The sun is gently creeping, through this hazy twist of lines Sparkling through the trails that these drips have left behind These sunbeams now upon me I can rid this somber plight The darkness ofdejection now awash in brilliant light Bringing forth a new beginning filled with strength and hope A brightly lit commencement giving me the will to cope The chance of opportunity, we often are denied Is sometimes right before us if we open up our eyes So long my friend of darkness I have no more tears to cry The sun is slowly rising, and on this day, so will I Richy |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
excellent! love the positive ending! |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Very beautiful...I am looking to the sky for a sunrise such as yours. Patricia |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
this is a beautiful poem filled with sorrow but with the sweetest ending of all... i like to see happy endings  ~Dawn |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Bringing forth a new beginning filled with strength and hope A brightly lit commencement giving me the will to cope Wonderful Richy! hugs, Chris "At one glance |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very positive uplifting write Richy! So pleased to be reading you again. Hugs~ In the midst of winter.. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Richy, this is so beautiful. We sure have missed you, Sir.  Hugs  Ethel |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Richy As I read this it was like listening to music that slowly got louder...and the end was so powerful and full of hope, yes, just like music. Each minute is a new beginning. Hug! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Richy~ Ahhhhhhhhhhhhh, doing what you do best ... reaching out with words of gentle, heartfelt touch~ 'So long my friend of darkness I have no more tears to cry The sun is slowly rising, and on this day, so will I' Oh my ! Adore the positivity in this thought~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Richy Well done, enjoyed the read. |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
what a wonderful tribute to the indomitable human spirit...loved its easy flow...great read |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Richy Your words were so powerful and I know so may can relate to this. Wonderful writing!! Take care.......Sue I am in motion |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Richy Your words were so powerful and I know so may can relate to this. Wonderful writing!! Take care.......Sue I am in motion |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I’ve wallowed in the shadows of this sorrow evermore I’ve hid from every truth that I no longer can ignore I’m looking for an answer I’m not sure I want to hear To see what is invisible is vision that I fear my favorite 2 verses...I am looking for a answer too, but am afraid to hear it *s M |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Dixie ~ Thank You. I really appreciate it. Patricia ~ I hope you found it Patricia. Thanks! Dawn ~ Thanks Dawn, me too. It’s nice meeting you. Chris ~ Thanks so much Chris! Nancy ~ I’m glad you liked it Nancy. Thank You! Ethel ~ That is so kind of you to say Ethel. I appreciate that! Martie ~ Yes Martie, it’s never too late to start anew. Thank You for that. Marge ~ You’re the absolute sweetest you know! Seymour ~ What a nice surprise it is to hear from you sir. I truly thank you! Steven ~ Thanks again for your support. I’m glad you’re here with us! Sue ~ Hi Sue, yeah I would guess some could. Hey, I bet you’re in the middle of a warm season down there, aren’t you? Good for you! Catch a few rays, for the rest of us. Maureen ~ Well Maureen, we’ll have to be anxious together, all right? :- ) Thanks so much for the reply! |
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