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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain 
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 "...why does my skeleton pursue me |
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WildPoet Member
since 2003-11-10
Posts 205California |
Sweet and hot!  WildPoet  |
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McLean Member
since 2004-01-05
Posts 484state of marital bliss |
You know, when I paint those cherry red lips, they're anything from sticky sweet. Maybe I'm buying the wrong lipstick.  This is a bit steamy a write...but yet...I still think of kissing my husband, and all that color and stickiness would be messy, taste of bland wax and douse any "steam" that was there to begin with. McLean |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Very nice! Love the lips... "sit on top of the world and tell me how you feel...'cause what you feel is what I feel for you.." |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
though this piece has nothing to do with lipstick ;-) thanks so much for the comments. snow "...why does my skeleton pursue me |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Unique presentation. Enjoyed. Chris "At one glance |
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McLean Member
since 2004-01-05
Posts 484state of marital bliss |
OMG! I read it again, snow, after seeing it wasn't about lipstick at all...and I found...that this one IS INDEED steamy. My interpretation now is very not rated for this room! I think it belongs in line with my "Stress Induced" poem. Think of it...Cherry Red and salty jerky...I would never eat anything with that gooky lipstick on, for fear it would douse the flavor. Ha! I'm enjoying your write even better now! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
ooohh..I LIKE it.... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Snow~ The sheer sensual beauty of this piece is reflected in your - 'red silk afternoon landscape' *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
Chris thanks so much! Gentle Spirit "ooohh" *smiling* thanks!!! Marge your thoughts are always so appreciated. thank you! McLean Omg.. you made it worth posting this piece here .. just for that second comment from you. I can almost see the look on your face.. *giggles* ... thanks soooo much for coming back for a second read!! Snow "...why does my skeleton pursue me |
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