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exhale
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since 2003-06-13
Posts 646
Alberta,Canada

0 posted 2004-01-26 11:44 PM


the words leave my mouth
shock stricken
i can't move
i didn't mean to say that
i was caught up in the moment

i plead
i beg
but you smile
i don't get it
your supposed to hate me
why aren't you running away
like all the others have
i love you too
oh dear god..

"Hello my name is distance.."

© Copyright 2004 Chelsea - All Rights Reserved
the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
1 posted 2004-01-26 11:46 PM


This is a cute and sweet poem

Cold hands means a warm heart

McLean
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since 2004-01-05
Posts 484
state of marital bliss
2 posted 2004-01-26 11:46 PM


This just makes me giggle.  I love that first...and I haven't thought of it in a long time.  What a sweet, confusing, wonderful, frightening moment.

McLean

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3 posted 2004-01-27 12:00 PM




(sigh) This is so beautifully bittersweet, dearest friend, this is a gentle outpouring of your heart, there is never any need to hide from love that won't stop giving, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Chelsea, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

ggrn3
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since 2000-08-17
Posts 433
Nahunta Georgia U.S.
4 posted 2004-01-27 12:16 PM


Man!!
Those 3 little words are sometimes the most frightening.  (RUUUNNN)lol.  Just kidding.  Sometimes they are music to your ears.  Let the music flow.  No track meets here.
I love this one.  Thanks for sharing.

Garfield

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