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Amature2
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0 posted 2004-01-26 07:28 PM



Thrill - less

The other day I rode by
A place that can't be real
It is a place that you called magic
A place where things seem
To roll up hill
I thought of stopping there
Maybe take the ride
But I knew it wouldn't be the same
Without you sitting next to me
The ride would have no thrill


"Everybody's lost
But they're pretending they're not
Lost"........Morrissey

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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace
1 posted 2004-01-26 07:29 PM


ahhhhhhh spook hill...lol
steavenr
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2 posted 2004-01-26 08:36 PM


I like this...isn't it amazing that no matter how unique a special place is, if you can't share it with that special one you love, it really becomes mundane?
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