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Justin Deen
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since 2004-01-22
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London, UK

0 posted 2004-01-26 06:56 PM


I look at you
I feel sick
Don't look at me
You prick
Sunken eye's
Bones, skin
Metabolism!
Very thin
Unknown face
Do you,
Have a race?
No space?
Hurt, pain
All tears
Heart? No
Just fears...
...I hate me


© Copyright 2004 Justin D. Thomas - All Rights Reserved
Mistletoe Angel
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1 posted 2004-01-26 08:59 PM






(big angel hugs) This is such a heartaching and poignant debut, sweet friend, know that you are truly special and soon you will see the essence of you and love youself more than you can imagine, God Bless You, we all go through these phases as it is part of growing up! Welcome to Passions, sweet Justin, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your wonderful words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Justin, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

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Member Rara Avis
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2 posted 2004-01-26 10:52 PM


Hi, and Welcome to Passions we are glad you have joined our circle of friends, and family….

please check your email for a special greeting


Kindly

Greeneyes~

~~**~~

I lie awake at night
I reach out to touch
Feel you by my side
I reach I never feel you
Will I ever get to feel you again
Just one more time

wordwizard
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since 2003-09-08
Posts 483
on the way to next world
3 posted 2004-01-26 10:58 PM


we all have different faces, it always better when you see on the inside and others too, I think..welcome


ggrn3
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since 2000-08-17
Posts 433
Nahunta Georgia U.S.
4 posted 2004-01-27 12:28 PM


Welcome Justin
Interesting write.  Painting a vivid but pretty dismal picture with this one.  I can't believe that this is anyone you know.  Very creative.
Keep posting.  Looking forward to reading more of your works.

Garfield

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displaced
5 posted 2004-01-27 03:36 AM


ouch
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