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Copperbell
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since 2003-11-08

Posts 956

0 posted 2004-01-26 01:19 PM

Orange bright,
The remaining dew from an ancient morning
Droplet of tree blood,
Did a beast of old release you from your flesh -
In its morning hunger?
Did you see one of the beasts that children dream of?

Has an ancient man tasted your brother?
A man, rugged and simple
And powerful
How often did he gaze at the same moon as I
Or marvel in the change of seasons?

Could he ever guess someone not yet born –
In ages distant, when he was but dust

Would wear you around their neck?

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2004-01-26 02:16 PM

Oh, very good!

Michelle_loves_Mike

Senior Member

since 2003-12-20

Posts 1189
Pennsylvania

2 posted 2004-01-26 02:30 PM

Very awsum write,,I love amber,,partialy for the fact it is a mini time capsule
michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

Copperbell
Senior Member

since 2003-11-08

Posts 956

3 posted 2004-01-26 02:42 PM

Thanks

Krawdad
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since 2001-01-03

Posts 2597

4 posted 2004-02-02 01:01 AM

Fascinating, as is the subject.

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

5 posted 2004-02-02 01:14 AM

I loved this when I read it the first time, but I forgot to comment on it. So glad that it was brought back up. Well done work...some poems are written, but this one is crafted...nicely done.

Richy
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

6 posted 2004-02-02 01:54 AM

So insightful.

Makes one wonder about our
own future?

Thank You for this.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

7 posted 2004-02-02 04:36 AM

yes! very good!

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

8 posted 2004-02-04 12:01 PM

Very nicely done, Copperbell...
I enjoyed this...
"When the power of love overcomes the love
of power the world will know peace."
--Jimi Hendrix

Copperbell
Senior Member

since 2003-11-08

Posts 956

9 posted 2004-02-04 09:45 AM

Thank you everyone - I appreciate your comments. This one was a lot of fun (and thought provoking) to write.

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