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Song About You
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Song About You |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada 
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This is a blues song designed for some traditional acoustic blues guitar with this old guitar in my hands n no light in my heart I been singin the blues since we've been apart You cut me deep n I feel like a fool now I got a fever left over from you. I put my trust in your promises like you knew I would do you kept me believin in me and you then along came old Santa sweet daddy claus he gave you everything a woman could want Chorus: baby playin this guitar don't settle no scores but someday woman I'll see you outside his door you'll be cryin girl cause he found someone new then you'll know the words to this song about you with this old guitar in my hands I'm gonna sing right through the pain right through the darkness, right through the rain til I can face the days with my heart healed n learn to deal with the way I feel chorus: baby this old guitar don't settle no scores but someday woman I'll see you outside his door you'll be cryin girl cause he found someone new then you'll know the words to this song about you Bridge: so when you see me baby don't ask me how I've been cause you know I been alone while you been with him girl don't say someday maybe we'll talk cause you ain't no friend... the only friend I got is this old guitar to help me sing out the hurt til I get over you for better or worse Rep Chorus: baby playin this guitar don't settle no scores but someday woman I'll see you outside his door you'll be cryin girl cause he found someone new then you'll know the words to this song about you Ain't doin nothin at all Just answerin the call Kinda driftin away from it all~~~~~ |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thanks Karilea for the move......Eric |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
ETHone~ You make me feel ... and I am richer for it~ Beautifully sung~  *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Oh Eric, this is wonderful, sweet friend, I would love to hear more of your songs as I hope to get mine up here on the net soon! (big angel hugs) God Bless You, sweet friend, a wonderful ballad, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eric, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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ggrn3 Member
since 2000-08-17
Posts 433Nahunta Georgia U.S. |
ethome, Grab your guitar, sit at a piano and put some music with this baby. I sung this one and I will sing with you as soon as you have finished the melody. Simply awesome. Garfield |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
How did I miss this? Now not only are the words incredibly good, and "country" but I happen to really like the song, it has real heart. Let me know when this one is out and I would sure buy it! Great job Eric. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
excellent! wow! I can hear the music in my heart! |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
I always hear the music in your words...gold for you Eric  |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Very captivating song! Love, Margherita |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Many thanks to all for the encouraging positive thoughts. I truly appreciate the comments so much. Eric Ain't doin nothin at all |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
This is really good! Sorry I missed it earlier...I'd sure like to hear it. ~K~ |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
 You were welcome then, and even more welcome now, as I take a moment to read it over, again...Just sorry I didn't respond the first time! I need to start sending your lyrics to my brother, who is also a musician...I think he'd enjoy looking them over! |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Sometimes music is the purest channel for the heart...well done. TD |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Very enjoyable song! Love, Margherita |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
this was beautiful!! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Eric, another good blues tune. But one comment about word order, I would reverse the position of 'pain' and 'rain' maybe (sing out in the rain)...just the way my heart and ears hear it. |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Oooh... the precious Blues! |
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