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GG
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0 posted 2004-01-26 02:58 AM



Hues of you will always haunt
My soul
You found me dead,
Revived me whole.
Just wish that I could change
The way things are for you…
Dying…
I can’t take it in, not yet.
Promises are cause for
Fret in me
And I’m just
Not willing
To see.


He was a man of sorrows
...I am a girl of tears.


[This message has been edited by GG (01-26-2004 05:52 AM).]

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1 posted 2004-01-26 03:11 AM


hugs you
garysgirl
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2 posted 2004-01-26 03:36 AM


Alyssa
Love ya, little friend.

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3 posted 2004-01-26 10:22 AM


Wow...!!
Eric

iliana
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4 posted 2004-02-01 08:22 PM


GG -- First, I'm so sorry to hear this.  The poem was so perfectly expressive of emotion of this nature.  You are such a brave poet!
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5 posted 2004-02-01 08:37 PM




(big angel hugs) I send many angel comfort hugs your way, sweet friend, soon this phase will pass by, keep the faith, dearest friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Alyssa, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

GG
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6 posted 2004-02-01 11:30 PM


Dix,
thank you so much...

Ethel,
you're so sweet, thank you...

Eric,
Thanks man!

He was a man of sorrows
...I am a girl of tears.

GG
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7 posted 2004-02-01 11:34 PM


iliana,
I'm glad you think so, thanks. About the brave, though, well, lol not so sure...

Noah,
I only pray this phase doesn't pass by the death of my best friend... Thanks much for your reply.

Always, Alyssa

He was a man of sorrows
...I am a girl of tears.

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8 posted 2004-02-06 04:27 PM


Dying…
I can’t take it in, not yet.
Promises are cause for
Fret in me
And I’m just
Not willing
To see.

Understandibly.  Wishing you well.
           ~sadelite

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9 posted 2004-02-06 04:43 PM


Alyssa~
Sending a plethora of *HUGS* from both of us~
*Huglets*
~*Marge & <))><

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

noles1@totcon.com

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10 posted 2004-02-06 04:50 PM



Grover
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11 posted 2004-02-06 04:51 PM


A sad verse... Grover.
GG
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12 posted 2004-02-06 07:47 PM


Sadie,
Thabk you for the bump, and for your wishes and understanding. Thank you

Marge and <))><
I love you both Thank you, and many hugs to you each...

Always, Alyssa

He was a man of sorrows
...I am a girl of tears.

GG
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13 posted 2004-02-06 07:48 PM


vandana,
you're sweet, thank you

Grover,
those seem to be what I write the most of... thanks

Always, Alyssa

He was a man of sorrows
...I am a girl of tears.

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