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exhale
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since 2003-06-13
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Alberta,Canada

0 posted 2004-01-25 11:05 PM


breathing in the aroma of love
its warming my heart
my soul
i'll try not to choke
i'll try not to breathe it in too deep
for fear of infection
for fear of rejection
i don't want to love you that much
it scares me
strumming my guitar
but all i can think of is you
i need more
i need more
i'm infected...


sorry i'm not in the best of moods today

[This message has been edited by exhale (01-26-2004 12:40 AM).]

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J.Samm
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since 2004-01-12
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Iloilo City, Philippines
1 posted 2004-01-25 11:08 PM


i need more, i'm infected... i'm not a stranger to that feeling.
McLean
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since 2004-01-05
Posts 484
state of marital bliss
2 posted 2004-01-26 07:40 AM


I'd say you've been bitten, for sure!

McLean

Susan Caldwell
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since 2002-12-27
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Florida
3 posted 2004-01-26 08:04 AM


"i don't want to love you that much
it scares me"

Why..yes...I know this feeling.

  hope that helps.

"sit on top of the world and tell me how you feel...'cause what you feel is what I feel for you.."
~Dido~

Michelle_loves_Mike
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Pennsylvania
4 posted 2004-01-26 02:26 PM


For some infections, you want no cure
michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

garysgirl
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5 posted 2004-01-26 02:28 PM


I can understand where this poem comes from.
But, the good outweighs the bad. Right?

muted
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Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving
6 posted 2004-01-26 02:29 PM


been there, still doin' that!!

sometimes a very good feeling...then, sometimes......


inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19
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Ohio
7 posted 2004-01-26 06:40 PM


sounds like youre possessed
Justin Deen
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since 2004-01-22
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London, UK
8 posted 2004-01-26 06:44 PM


Well, I wouldn't change a thing about this poem, it's heart warming, as from the comments, everyone can relate to it, very nice piece of writing...Justin Deen
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