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whiteycg
Junior Member
since 2004-01-24
Posts 11


0 posted 2004-01-25 09:39 PM


Once in a while, you make a friend who becomes a larger part of you than you know...


DEBT

Just who are your friends?
Over time you find out
They’re always there to listen
And they never let you doubt

And when you’re in need
They help you meet your ends
They’re always there to be
The one who you depend

Well this one’s for you
And I’ll never forget
How you helped me get through
For that I’m in debt

You could have just gone
You were the only one left
The last one who tried
And didn’t care less

Over time we have parted
You’re still in the back of my mind
I still think bout how we started
I remember how you were kind

Well here I am now
I hope you still remember me
I want to repay your efforts
And be the best friend I can be


Chorus:

I couldn’t have made it along without you
You changed my life, helped me get through
I remember your advice when things aren’t fair
When I was down you have always been there

© Copyright 2004 whiteycg - All Rights Reserved
McLean
Member
since 2004-01-05
Posts 484
state of marital bliss
1 posted 2004-01-25 09:40 PM


I really like this one, and the title is so catching, dear...



McLean

J.Samm
Member
since 2004-01-12
Posts 415
Iloilo City, Philippines
2 posted 2004-01-25 10:25 PM


welcome to the forum! write on!
iliana
Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
3 posted 2004-02-24 12:23 PM


Whiteycg -- so true about good friends!  Enjoyed this very much and it would be a good song.
passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
4 posted 2004-02-24 04:10 AM


touching write...welcome to Passions
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