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PassionatelyRomantic
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since 2004-01-24

Posts 190

0 posted 2004-01-25 08:24 PM

We dance the dance of love
in the darkness of the night
we dance around like two flowers in the wind
we glide over the floor like two butterflies in flight
my body rubs against yours
as my hands caress your back
my eyes stare deep into your blue eyes and penetrate your soul
as yours stare back
we are together as one
united in a moment of time
where nothing else in the world matters
but sometime the dance must end
and we must seperate
like two butterflies in flight,
moving to seperate flowers.

[This message has been edited by PassionatelyRomantic (01-27-2004 10:19 AM).]

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2004-01-26 03:09 AM

it does wonders, doesn't it?

I love the gulf!

ggrn3
Member

since 2000-08-17

Posts 433
Nahunta Georgia U.S.

2 posted 2004-01-26 05:15 AM

Nude Huh.
I could only imagine. Sunset or Moonlit beach would be romantic. Sand, water, wind; what a sight.
Nicely written.

Garfield

McLean
Member

since 2004-01-05

Posts 484
state of marital bliss

3 posted 2004-01-26 06:58 AM

Whew! Steamy, and salty like jerky (hahaha!).

Nice to read you today, warming the freeky cold morning.

McLean

PassionatelyRomantic
Member

since 2004-01-24

Posts 190

4 posted 2004-01-26 02:50 PM

Simply thank you. I appreciate you taking the time to read my poetry and reply, and for that I am sincerely blessed.

luvrsheart
New Member

since 2004-01-25

Posts 7

5 posted 2004-01-26 03:34 PM

I still thank it sux Losr

PassionatelyRomantic
Member

since 2004-01-24

Posts 190

6 posted 2004-01-26 06:10 PM

once again thank you

luvrsheart
New Member

since 2004-01-25

Posts 7

7 posted 2004-02-05 10:31 PM

WOW THIS POEM IS SO ROMANTIC IT IS SO BEAUTIFUL AND THE DESCRIPTIONS ARE SO CLEAR
I LOVE IT!

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

8 posted 2004-02-05 11:33 PM

(smiles) Oh Jared, this is beautiful, sweet friend, yay, and may this dance always move forever on in your heart in joy! God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jared, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

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