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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2004-01-27 07:12 PM


To Reach

There inside, I feel the words beating a rhythm.
One, only I can hear through the memory of reach.
A destination of find, a treasure to be kept
in the air that we breathe, as the distance
crosses one's mind and leads me back to you.
~~
M


inspired by Ericc's the Edge of My Hand
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"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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Enchantress
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Canada eh.
1 posted 2004-01-27 07:15 PM


A beautiful inspired write Maureen.
Excellent!
Very much enjoyed.
~Hugs & Smiles~

~ Is that love I see in your eyes...
  or merely a reflection of mine? ~

inkedgoddess
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2 posted 2004-01-27 08:26 PM


you did so describe that feeling that is deeply and inherent in only your own universe inside you....so wonderfully
enjoying the n.e. weather? ugh.........

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
3 posted 2004-01-27 08:36 PM


Thanks Nancy, and no Michele, am getting tired of shoveling snow and ice...and we  are having more right now...but I am ready to call it a semi-night and shovel around 1 this morning. How about you  

hugs
M

[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (01-27-2004 09:49 PM).]

Saunni
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4 posted 2004-01-27 09:45 PM


Damn... this one got me! All the way! I love it! Sincerely, Sauni

Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain.

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just out of reach
5 posted 2004-01-27 10:54 PM


Oh, Maureen! I love this. Can I keep it? Thanks.    hugs, Chris

"At one glance
I love you
With a thousand hearts."


— Mihri Hatun, Turkish poet



    

JamesMichael
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6 posted 2004-01-27 11:22 PM


Enjoyed...James
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7 posted 2004-01-27 11:25 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwwww, you know how to bring the miles together with your words like Eric can, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maureen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

passing shadows
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8 posted 2004-01-28 04:10 AM


lovely write...inspired well
Susan Caldwell
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9 posted 2004-01-28 08:37 AM


This was very nice, M!

Sweet memories...even if they are hard.

"sit on top of the world and tell me how you feel...'cause what you feel is what I feel for you.."
~Dido~

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
10 posted 2004-01-28 01:31 PM



No more, no less.
Well done, Maureen!

Chanson
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11 posted 2004-01-29 09:22 AM


I always enjoy your inspired writes, M. *s
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