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MARK V SHELDON
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0 posted 2004-01-25 05:58 PM


TWENTY OR LESS…#185

Copyright 2004 by:MARK V SHELDON


stone-crushing iconoclasm

demolishing fanatics

rock your marble

sculpturing works


when in Rome…


You CAN make a difference:
http://educate-yourself.org/

© Copyright 2004 Mark V Sheldon - All Rights Reserved
Amara
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1 posted 2004-01-25 06:10 PM


Er- stone-crushing *what*?

So many big words! Took me a second read to catch most of it.

You managed to give a very 'stone-like' and majestic feel to the piece- in so few words, too!

I must say, "rock your marble" made me smile, it sounds- well, I'm not sure *what* it sounds like!

Love and Light,
Always,
Amara


To see something as an end is to mourn for it; to see it as a beginning is to have hope. So have hope, and realize that life is not made up of ends, b

MARK V SHELDON
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2 posted 2004-01-25 06:16 PM


Thank you for your observations, Amara.  It's always fun to carefully balance the wordplay and read what others gain from or how they are affected by these TOL series...  I guess you could say it's a subjective objective...

-MVS

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http://educate-yourself.org/

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3 posted 2004-01-25 06:23 PM


subjective objective
LOL, ie another Markism

good to read your offerings again

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4 posted 2004-01-25 06:30 PM




(sigh) When, where, and how! (big angel hugs) Wow, Rome has always been the hotspot, give Florence a try again, hehehe, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Mark, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

MARK V SHELDON
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5 posted 2004-01-25 06:42 PM


Kacy -- a "Markism", eh? (chuckle)  Wasn't aware of them, but appreciate the awareness and your thoughts.  

Noah:  ...or perhaps Tuscany?  Thanks for stopping by.

-MVS

You CAN make a difference:
http://educate-yourself.org/

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
6 posted 2004-01-25 06:59 PM


Um... You rock my world?
Ya gotta love it when a writer makes you stop and think.
Good one Mark!
Hugs~

    In the midst of winter..
I found there lives within me,
    an invincible summer.

Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 2004-01-25 07:09 PM


MARK,
Perhaps overwhelmed, I was when I was there.
Enjoyed.

MARK V SHELDON
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8 posted 2004-01-25 07:35 PM


Nancy:

Sy, I suppose even more overwhelming would be to do as the Romans...

-MVS

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http://educate-yourself.org/

McLean
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9 posted 2004-01-26 07:43 AM


Huh?  You are making me work today.  It's supposed to be a lazy-stay-in-out-of-the-icky-icy-weather day.  Geez...going to get out the Websters...brb

McLean  

iliana
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10 posted 2004-02-24 12:41 PM


Mark -- missed this one before.  You are so creative -- brilliant.  Yes, a book, Mark, a book!
MARK V SHELDON
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11 posted 2004-02-24 02:47 PM


Jo, you are most encouraging.  Any ideas regarding publishers...?  (I'm almost at #200...)

Thanks,

-MVS

You CAN make a difference:
http://educate-yourself.org/

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