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ctowen
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0 posted 2004-01-25 05:24 PM



a new dawn,
morning light

setting suns,
to coming night ...

which is it?
only one?
could it be
ever undone?

open hearts,
in one's hand,
free to be,
to make a stand

how to start?
when to hold?
the circle
we must unfold

what to do?
now or then?
beginnings
or just an end?

One's outlook can be another's expression.
  

© Copyright 2004 C. Thomas Owen - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-01-25 05:35 PM




(smiles) We should play hop-scotch in the middle of the circle I dare say! (big angel hugs) There the firsts and lasts will take course, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Craig, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

muted
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2 posted 2004-01-25 05:38 PM


same questions ive asked myself...
..very well stated

Amara
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3 posted 2004-01-25 05:46 PM


Now, *this* is nice! And a question I've asked myself so many times, lately.

Beginnings. Everything is a beginning. To see it as an end is to mourn for it; to see it as a beginning is to see hope. ^^ But that's simply my own rambling.

As a side note, I *like* your Critique comment! However, you used 'than' instead of 'then'. ^^()

Well done, ctowen. May life bring you many beginnings.

Love and Light,
Always,
Amara

.:: night is thickest when dawn draws nigh ::.

MARK V SHELDON
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4 posted 2004-01-25 06:10 PM


I say it's all a spiral -- hopefully an upwards one.  That is why so much seems the same but with the advantage of a slightly different perspective...

-MVS

You CAN make a difference:
http://educate-yourself.org/

inkedgoddess
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5 posted 2004-01-27 12:17 PM


what to do?
now or then?
beginnings
or just an end?


do we need to decide just yet?

passing shadows
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6 posted 2004-01-27 12:19 PM


hard to tell sometimes

(gotta agree with inked here too)

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