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lovejunkie
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0 posted 2004-01-25 05:13 PM


I’d throw myself into the snow
but it would take my breath away
Breath I work so hard to keep
escapes me most of the day

Lungs on fire
I’d throw myself in
Get licked by the flames
Let the real Hell begin

"All you need is love..." -The Beatles

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1 posted 2004-01-25 05:24 PM




(big hugggsssssss) I understand just how you feel. Freezing is far more torture than burning, and I would choose to burn so I can get through the stage quicker without having to feel numb the hours away! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, I send comfort hugs your way, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Steph, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton


"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

Tim
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2 posted 2004-01-26 09:18 PM


interesting...
garysgirl
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3 posted 2004-02-15 03:02 PM


This is an interesting poem.
Well-written.
Hugs  
Ethel

Grover
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4 posted 2004-02-15 03:33 PM


Contrast is interesting! Grover.
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