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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2004-01-25 04:15 PM


In My Waiting Arms

I have looked at her in admiration
and thought to myself, how could God
make a woman as beautiful as she.
He could have created her for my pleasure.
She could have been the special one for me.
I wish that she could curl up on my couch
to watch Hong Kong movies in my waiting arms.
But she remains married and I entertain
another fantasy that could only lead
me and her to harm.

JamesLee
January21
2004



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1 posted 2004-01-25 04:18 PM


this is painful...
wish there was a way to offer solace..
*hug* will have to suffice.

Suetang
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2 posted 2004-01-25 04:20 PM


Hello James

Oh, the pain of love and longing.  

Take care.....Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

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3 posted 2004-01-25 04:53 PM




(big angel hugs) Awwwwwwww, I'm sorry to hear she is apparently not available, dearest friend, there will be one who has her golden heart that will be there for you, yay, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

McLean
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4 posted 2004-01-26 07:48 AM


Oooo-weeee...a punch line or two that was unexpected when I selected this one.  You are a smart man...enjoy the fantasy only, dear!

McLean

Ericc
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5 posted 2004-01-26 10:19 AM


Nicely told!

Eric

iliana
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6 posted 2004-02-24 12:49 PM


I love poems with punch lines -- good writing.
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