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Sweetest Sorrow X
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From a cradle to a casket

0 posted 2004-01-25 04:03 PM



She really thinks she knows it all.
So supperior, but everything she knows is wrong
And she knows what she thinks
but she doesnt think at all
She thinks life isn't fair
I guess but...I don't care
And she thinks she's all I've got
but it's obvious that she's not
Everthing is just a walk in the park
when your perfect
when your so smart
when it comes to looks
she's the perfect pick
if you havn't noticed I'm bein sarcastic.

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1 posted 2004-01-25 04:09 PM


sarcasm duly noted!
first ive seen of you so i'll say hello...and welcome to passions.

JamesMichael
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2 posted 2004-01-25 04:09 PM


Enjoyed...James
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3 posted 2004-01-25 05:11 PM




(big angel hugs) This is so very true, dearest friend, just because one may have the looks and popularity doesn't make someone happy or just in every way! (sigh) It all comes from how much you give unto yourself and others, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

Tim
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4 posted 2004-01-26 09:19 PM


I take it somebody did something ya didn't like.  Guess this is telling her like it is.
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5 posted 2004-01-27 03:46 AM


cute
McLean
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6 posted 2004-01-30 10:03 PM


Funny, funny...and great color choice to go with the writing!  

McLean

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