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Timeless moments |
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Michelle_loves_Mike
since 2003-12-20
Posts 1189Pennsylvania 
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Timeless moments Remembered always in vivid memory moments that form your days the first steps,,,,the last bow the first kiss,,,,,the last good bye the first touch,,,,the last embrace forever captured,,timeless in feeling experienced by all,,different,yet deep the first love,,,,,the last regret the first child,,,,the last from nest the first pain,,,,,the last forgotten Timeless moments,,,always there I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Michelle_loves_Mike - always the opposite is there, nice write... BC |
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McLean Member
since 2004-01-05
Posts 484state of marital bliss |
Oh, this fits my mood as of late, Michelle. Well-worded, dear! McLean |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
Michelle, You capture this journey so well...strong write....~C |
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Michelle_loves_Mike
since 2003-12-20
Posts 1189Pennsylvania |
Bill, McLean, and Choshi,,,thank you for your kind words,,,and yes Bill, down is always followed by up,,,,which is a good thing,,,,,take care Michelle I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big angel hugs) Awwwwwwwww, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, always cherish all these special memories and organize them in your hearts photo album, yay, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Michelle, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
very nice...brings out that reflection that makes us all feel good about things...thanks for sharing |
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Ringo
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
You know, Michelle... all of this sappines ahs just GOT to go. You know I can't stand to be around that... that... oooohhhhh... I get shivvers of nausea just thinking about it. Now, how are we supposed to still hang out???? Cause in my dreams it's always there |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Remembered always in vivid memory moments that form your days the first steps,,,,the last bow the first kiss,,,,,the last good bye the first touch,,,,the last embrace This stands out, and could stand alone. Nice, Michelle~ |
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Michelle_loves_Mike
since 2003-12-20
Posts 1189Pennsylvania |
Im glad you all feel what I say,,,, Ringo,,you know what?.....no,,I wont say it here, but, will say something the next time we talk Michelle I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Beautiful. Eric |
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Copperbell Senior Member
since 2003-11-08
Posts 956 |
This makes me think of my friend's mom, when she passed on and her husband was there...He just wanted to climb into the hospital bed and lie with her, touching her for the last time. So tender... |
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