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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Stiff I know you are worried and think I have lost my faith I haven’t I still have hope I just see things through new eyes and just remember even egg whites stiffen when beaten long enough |
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Michelle_loves_Mike
since 2003-12-20
Posts 1189Pennsylvania |
and just remember even egg whites stiffen when beaten long enough thats a profound way to look at even the meekest of soul Michelle I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
1slick_lady - to see through new eyes is good. Nice write... BC |
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McLean Member
since 2004-01-05
Posts 484state of marital bliss |
I sense emotion frozen cold here. I enjoy reading your style, it appears simple, stream-of-conscious in design, but so very full a meaning. Usually your writes lead the reader to think, "ah, I've got this one", until your punch line at the end, and we go, "wait a minute, where was that blind curve?". A master at what you do! McLean |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
Nice one....to the point, evokes strong feelings....~C |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
1slick_lady Home run, enjoyed. |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
You must have an Ed-scope... you keep writing little pieces of me....two days ago someone I care about commented that I seemed a little stiff....and that was the cause, though I would never have come to this way of saying it. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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gadfly4you Junior Member
since 2004-01-24
Posts 37 |
I loved this, austere and thick at the same time.... |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) And it is okay to see through new eyes, as long as we don't tuck the old corona to behind our sockets! (big angel hugs) God Bless You, sweet friend, faith is a gift for all, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed  |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
clever ending......enjoyed _________ice ><> |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Oh... I like this very much! *S* Excellent write! *S* |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful write Helen.. LOVE the ending!! Hugs~ ~ Is that love I see in your eyes... |
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Ravenwolfvoyager Member
since 2003-12-25
Posts 326 |
even egg whites stiffen when beaten long enough Very true, spiritfully done 1slick, a thought to ponder for sure, thank you. Excellent! |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
They also become fluffy and luscious, in only the most delicate way... So nice to read you again SlickLady I’ve missed your writing! Richy |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
UGH, this ..I feel... |
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