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Open Poetry #31

Haiku

MexicoCityBlues
Junior Member

since 2004-01-04

Posts 48
The Point of Know Return

0 posted 2004-01-25 01:52 AM

dead dead dead
ms. johnson smile
love love love

"The story of life is quicker than the wink of an eye. The story of love is Hello and Goodbye. Until we meet again..." -Jimi Hendrix

McLean
Member

since 2004-01-05

Posts 484
state of marital bliss

1 posted 2004-01-25 01:57 AM

I'm not proficient in Haiku, but this one stalls me. Dead, Dead, Dead, I just don't get. But it sounds like it ends well, and that is a good thing!

McLean

Michelle_loves_Mike

Senior Member

since 2003-12-20

Posts 1189
Pennsylvania

2 posted 2004-01-25 07:31 AM

I agree with McLean
Michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

3 posted 2004-01-25 08:20 AM

MexicoCityBlues - ok, this is different...

BC

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2004-01-25 07:19 PM

(sigh) Wow, the repetition sure got to me here, I am speechless but this truly is novel and I enjoy it! (big angel hugs) God Bless You, sweet friend, I too am curious of the "dead" cadence, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Carson, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

lovejunkie
Member

since 2003-12-31

Posts 93
Indiana

5 posted 2004-01-25 08:16 PM

grah....it's about HER.

*muffled complaints*

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