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Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

0 posted 2004-01-24 11:28 PM

Within the eyes of one beheld from whence the heart did rise
A picture showing did foretell of what was seen the eyes.
For in the eyes, the twinkling skies did fall upon my gaze
and from a cloudless starry night I stared in my amaze.

For what was seen but never seen was seen before this day
and from the sight of what was seen, I simply now must say
that from the view of red and smiles I certainly now do grin
and thank you for the journey and the trophy of one’s win.

This gift you gave so tenderly shall rest within the soul
and from this gift of tenderness a brassy bell shall toll.
Till skies do fall in darkest night before the full of moon
I’ll stand in thought of happiness which came to me this soon.

McLean
Member

since 2004-01-05

Posts 484
state of marital bliss

1 posted 2004-01-24 11:31 PM

Happy Thoughts! You write exquisitely, my friend.

McLean

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

2 posted 2004-01-25 12:42 PM

Barry

soft and tender
perfect in harmony

~~**~~

I lie awake at night
I reach out to touch
Feel you by my side
I reach I never feel you
Will I ever get to feel you again
Just one more time

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

3 posted 2004-01-25 02:13 AM

Sooooo sweet! I especially enjoyed your play with words in the second stanza.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2004-01-25 10:33 AM

I doubt I will ever again spy
a twinkling eye
without thinking of this.
Thank you, Magnus

Patricia
Member Elite

since 2003-04-06

Posts 2160
Missouri

5 posted 2004-01-25 11:50 AM

How beautiful, Barry. The girls (all three of us here) loved this.

Patricia

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

6 posted 2004-01-25 12:32 PM

There is much tenderness in your grateful and endearing words.
Nicely said and done, Barry~

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

7 posted 2004-01-25 12:37 PM

beautiful tribute

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

8 posted 2004-01-25 06:59 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is beautifully delightful, sweet friend, I too love cloudless nights so I can see beyond all else in this precious galaxy and know I am small compared to it all and greater blessings will be bestowed upon us all, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

9 posted 2004-01-25 08:18 PM

twinkling eyes within a playful lilt

ENJOYED!!!

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

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