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McLean
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state of marital bliss

0 posted 2004-01-24 10:16 PM



gently
ever-so
I touch his tender cheek
and in that very instance
he looks up to me
with trusting eyes of blue
and I see you
dwelling within
this peaceful soul
it is this very moment
I treasure
and know
our union is invested
secured
immortalized
in him
our precious son

written by inspirational coos from our son, McLean, as I laid him down for sleep tonight

© Copyright 2004 McLean - All Rights Reserved
Mistletoe Angel
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1 posted 2004-01-24 10:21 PM




(wipes tears of joy) Awwwwwwww, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, this made me tear up as the love of a child is the most special love and McLean will always love you, yay! (smiles) God Bless You and your loved ones always, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

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2 posted 2004-01-24 10:23 PM


awwwww heart hugs, dont ya just love these little moments....yes of course you do...enjoyed!


I lie awake at night
I reach out to touch
Feel you by my side
I reach I never feel you
Will I ever get to feel you again
Just one more time

McLean
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state of marital bliss
3 posted 2004-01-24 10:23 PM


Noah!!!  You are hot on the trail tonight!  I think you replied before I posted.  How do you do that?  

Thank you much for your comments.  You are quite the inspiration to all of us, with your positive outlooks and words of cheer and praise.  You smell of sunshine, dear friend!

McLean

McLean
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state of marital bliss
4 posted 2004-01-24 10:25 PM


Yes, Greeneyes...fantastic moments are all around us.  Tickles me pink when I slow down long enough to savor one.  So glad you understand!
Snow
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5 posted 2004-01-24 10:34 PM


"and I see you
dwelling within
this peaceful soul"


pure bliss

enjoyed this very much.

snow

"...why does my skeleton pursue me
if my soul has fallen away?"
~p.neruda


choshi
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6 posted 2004-01-25 10:27 AM


Just beautiful! Oh yes...radiates with truth and warmth this winter morning.   ~C
Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now
7 posted 2004-01-25 10:47 AM


McLean - this is so very delicate writing, nice, very nice...

BC

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8 posted 2004-01-25 11:45 AM


McLean~
Such tender, tender penning~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

noles1@totcon.com

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9 posted 2004-01-25 12:58 PM


makes me wish mine were young again...
Martie
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10 posted 2004-01-25 01:42 PM


McLean

Precious and sweet are those moments...thank you of reminding me of mine.

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
11 posted 2004-01-25 01:54 PM


very sweet and loving...
*s
M

iliana
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12 posted 2004-02-16 01:28 PM


Ohhhhh, yes.  I understand this so very well.  Beautiful and precious!
Grover
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13 posted 2004-02-16 01:35 PM


Very good! Grover.
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
14 posted 2004-02-16 01:42 PM



...Beautiful!!...

  ~ Whatever our souls are made of,
      his and mine are the same. ~      
            

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