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Sunshine
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0 posted 2004-01-24 09:56 PM





Spring trembled but once
Yesterday’s white warmth, so false
Layered skies, swelling
Rains could come to bloat yon creek
Better snow, tracks to follow


© Copyright 2004 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-01-24 09:59 PM


Don't feel bad KJ,  we only get rain,  never
snow....

Very nicely said,  title fits well.

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2 posted 2004-01-24 10:17 PM


awww but Lady Spring is in the wind....floating softly behind all the snow


hugssss

I lie awake at night
I reach out to touch
Feel you by my side
I reach I never feel you
Will I ever get to feel you again
Just one more time

Mistletoe Angel
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3 posted 2004-01-24 10:19 PM




(sigh) We've seldom got snow here so far this winter, we got some late last week and are expecting a new winter system for Monday, but otherwise it has been dry and arid out here! (smiles) here's hoping this new storm brings some fluuries your way, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

ThisDiamond
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4 posted 2004-01-25 12:34 PM


Winters can be warm, snow can be warming...You dear lady, are sunshine. TD
Neeraja
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5 posted 2004-01-25 07:11 AM


I love this little winterpoem...
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6 posted 2004-01-25 07:19 AM


I hate Kansas.

That might be harsh.

Bill Charles
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7 posted 2004-01-25 08:31 AM


Sunshine - bring on spring, I'm freezing here...

BC

Patricia
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8 posted 2004-01-25 10:07 AM


You got snow?  We got ice.  Wanna swap?  Nah...just get me out of here, get those lavender teacups from the cupboard, I am on my way.  We shall poem the day together with verses of spring.

Hugs to you!

Patricia

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9 posted 2004-02-16 12:13 PM


Sunshine, I love this perspective!  
Martie
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10 posted 2004-02-16 12:19 PM


Karilea

You always see behind the clouds...that is how you got your name, after all.  

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11 posted 2004-02-16 12:45 PM


Soon now Karilea.....soon.



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12 posted 2004-02-16 12:55 PM


just doesn't seem fair...like the season is teasing us
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