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choshi
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since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

0 posted 2004-01-24 09:27 PM

In a stand of pines
bent by the weight of snow,
this silent dawn-
the sole trace of fleeing deer;
white whirling from the branches.
[This message has been edited by choshi (01-25-2004 04:23 AM).]

McLean
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since 2004-01-05

Posts 484
state of marital bliss

1 posted 2004-01-24 09:43 PM

We have pines here. They remind me of naked q-tips, standing too tall for beauty and high enough to be hazardous. They are like, ummm, the are like misplaced objects that have no real home.

Thank goodness not all pines are like the ones here in the Pee Dee region.

McLean

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

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By the Seaside

2 posted 2004-01-24 09:54 PM

Thank you for this beauty,
and for sharing the scenery of your thoughts.

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2004-01-24 10:07 PM

(smiles) Yay! Awwwwwww, we have so many pines here in the Colorado Rocky Mountains, dearest friend, I just love te clean refreshing air and serenity up on the peaks, yay, God Bless You, this painted a Bob Ross picture to me, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Paul, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

Greeneyes

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In Your Poetic Mind

4 posted 2004-01-24 10:14 PM

Paul~

I always have such memories when I read you....this brings back memories of going to my grandmothers farm where all the pines trees were so lovely and so big...thank you

I lie awake at night
I reach out to touch
Feel you by my side
I reach I never feel you
Will I ever get to feel you again
Just one more time

choshi
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since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

5 posted 2004-01-25 10:32 AM

Paul~

I always have such memories when I read you....this brings back memories of going to my grandmothers farm where all the pines trees were so lovely and so big...thank you

Greeneyes, I am so glad this poem was evocative...no you have stirred my memories...Thank you ~P

choshi
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since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

6 posted 2004-01-25 10:34 AM

we have so many pines here in the Colorado Rocky Mountains, dearest friend, I just love te clean refreshing air and serenity up on the peaks,

Sounds just incredibly lovely....someday, my feet will stand on that ground...for now there are the amcient mountains of NY State...~P

choshi
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since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

7 posted 2004-01-25 10:35 AM

We have pines here. They remind me of naked q-tips, standing too tall for beauty and high enough to be hazardous.

hhmmm, what an interesting image of pines as Q-tips...

choshi
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since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

8 posted 2004-01-25 10:36 AM

Thank you for this beauty,
and for sharing the scenery of your thoughts.

....Thank you Blue..

muted

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Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

9 posted 2004-01-25 12:59 PM

not many pine trees here, no snow whirling, and no deer fleeing..so i dont have much to recollect for you (everyone else seemed to have such lovely memories)...
but as far as this poem goes,
its left a tiny little painted image of a captured scene that really was nice to look at in this moment....

Dawn

passing shadows
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displaced

10 posted 2004-01-25 01:04 PM

crisp! nice write!

choshi
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since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

11 posted 2004-01-25 02:17 PM

not many pine trees here, no snow whirling, and no deer fleeing..so i dont have much to recollect for you (everyone else seemed to have such lovely memories)...
but as far as this poem goes,
its left a tiny little painted image of a captured scene that really was nice to look at in this moment....

Dawn

Thank you Dawn, and if you painted images for us of where you see the world from I know they would be most evocative.....~Paul

choshi
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since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

12 posted 2004-01-25 02:18 PM

crisp! nice write!
.....Thank you Dixie ~P

iliana
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since 2003-12-05

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USA

13 posted 2004-02-16 01:28 PM

choshi -- lovely, lovely! You always take me there!

Sadelite
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since 2003-10-11

Posts 2519

14 posted 2004-02-16 01:47 PM

you take me there, too! Lovely trip.
~Sadelite~

Grover
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since 2004-01-27

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London, ON, Canada

15 posted 2004-02-16 02:20 PM

Very nice poem, well written! Grover.

GG
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Lost in thought

16 posted 2004-02-16 02:29 PM

This picture is a familiar one...
and a lovely one too

Warming in its wintery way!

Always, Alyssa

He was a man of sorrows
...I am a girl of tears.

choshi
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since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

17 posted 2004-02-17 08:43 PM

choshi -- lovely, lovely! You always take me there!

Iliana, Thank you so much....we journey there together....~P

choshi
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since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

18 posted 2004-02-17 08:45 PM

you take me there, too! Lovely trip.
~Sadelite~
You are a welcome companion on this amazing journey that we share together.....Thank you Sadie....~P

choshi
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since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

19 posted 2004-02-17 08:46 PM

Very nice poem, well written! Grover.

Thank you Grover, I appreciate your kindness...~P

choshi
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since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

20 posted 2004-02-17 08:47 PM

This picture is a familiar one...
and a lovely one too
Warming in its wintery way!

Always, Alyssa

Thank you Alyssa.....familiar? In what ways? ~P

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