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whiteycg
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0 posted 2004-01-24 08:46 PM


This one I wrote to one of my old girlfriends...

LOOK IN MY EYES

When we sit close together
It’s the look in your eyes
How you make me feel
You send me up high

It’s the peaceful serenity
It just feels so right
With your arms around me
When I’m holding you tight

I speak to you softly  
Touch my hands to your lips
Brush the hair from your face
Move in close for a kiss

I can’t find the words
Just look in my eyes
I tell you I love you
You know I can't lie

When we lay down at night
Your dreams are so deep
You snuggle on top of me
And you smile in your sleep

This is how I know
You’re the one for me
You’re the only thing left
That makes me happy

Chorus:
I need you in my life no matter how hard it gets
You help me get through it when my life takes a hit
Come spend your life with me and we’ll run away
Happily ever after for the rest of our days

© Copyright 2004 whiteycg - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-01-24 09:50 PM




(big angel hugs) Awwwwwwwww, she just has to accept your invitation as you have a heart deserving of much happiness! (smiles) This would make a wonderful radio song, yay, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

JamesMichael
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2 posted 2004-01-26 07:01 PM


Nice writing...James
passing shadows
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3 posted 2004-01-27 12:51 PM


nice one...I remember feeling that way
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