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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
Doubts and uncertainties dangerously close to dependence same scene Aware this time that I almost closed my eyes again There is something about a revelation isn’t there that brings you to your knees and then everything that happens after that is truth revealed Life isn’t easier I don’t float like an angel My strength has been put to its greatest test and I protect myself Will trust and knowing betray me again He the teacher me the student Why do I always put them there Like apples and oranges caught in the balance Book of knowledge never learned |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
"There is something about a revelation isn’t there that brings you to your knees and then everything that happens after that is truth revealed Life isn’t easier I don’t float like an angel My strength has been put to its greatest test and I protect myself Will trust and knowing betray me again" youre saying the same things i wanna scream out! Looks like you are living the same chapter i am at the moment... and in this im grateful someone understands where im coming from!! |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Oh Rubillamn, I think we can all relate to these feelings, dearest friend, then again why substitute apples and oranges when you use pineapples instead, fruit, skin, and nectar, a fine trinity indeed! (smiles) God Bless You, sweet friend, He always loves us all, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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McLean Member
since 2004-01-05
Posts 484state of marital bliss |
Bravo! Bravo! Yippie... You have mastered this description. Strong you are to acknowledge this, and stronger you will grow every day. Promise! McLean |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
It's safer in the long run to keep your eyes open, but it's not always easy, is it? Hope you have a mellow and happy year m'friend. Kiss that Olympic Mist for me, will ya? |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
yes, and happy trails to you! I'll send you my ph #'s in case you need a bush under which to spred whatever it is that gypsies tote.. haha ~K~ |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
There is something about a revelation isn’t there that brings you to your knees and then everything that happens after that is truth revealed Fabulous poem, and a wonderful message Kahlil~ Good reading this morning! Thank you for this. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 well done! |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
 Good work! jo |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Great job... well done! Grover. |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
kahil, Seems like tests just begin when high school ends! There were many times in my life that I could identify with this, as others here probably can too. You're questioning-that's good. Keep the good head on your shoulders. Nice writing. ~Sadelite~ |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
thank you so much ~K~ |
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