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ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

0 posted 2004-01-24 07:23 PM

Scarlet waves and streaming gold
bleeding against coming cold
as endless blues find their way
across Heaven's end of day

And stars fill the fallen air
where today's sun once shined bare
to fall themselves, out of sight
leaving behind silent night

My thoughts of you take their place
upon clouds of Angel's grace
now darkened by empty's touch
where rain once fed dreams of such

My heart beats in search of you
this silent night, through and through

One's outlook can be another's expression.

muted

Member Elite

since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

1 posted 2004-01-24 07:25 PM

"My thoughts of you take their place
upon clouds of Angel's grace
now darkened by empty's touch
where rain once fed dreams of such

My heart beats in search of you
this silent night, through and through "

you gave me shivers of sadness....
but gracefully done

Jason Lyle
Senior Member

since 2003-02-07

Posts 1438
With my darkling

2 posted 2004-01-24 07:46 PM

Another great write Craig.

Jason

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2004-01-24 07:49 PM

(big angel hugs) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is sad but so beautifully faithful! (sigh) Always hold the memories true to your heart and cherish them as love will paint the skies amber again, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Craig, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

4 posted 2004-01-24 10:21 PM

My heart beats in search of you
this silent night, through and through'''
you write with such passion....amazing sir...

Me~

I lie awake at night
I reach out to touch
Feel you by my side
I reach I never feel you
Will I ever get to feel you again
Just one more time

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

5 posted 2004-01-25 08:42 AM

ctowen - a most beautiful write, never really looked at the night like this, yet it's true...

BC

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2004-01-25 01:02 PM

oh Craig...how bittersweet, beautifully sad

Tim
Senior Member

since 1999-06-08

Posts 1794

7 posted 2004-01-27 08:15 AM

enjoyed the poem. Nicely done.

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

8 posted 2004-01-27 08:56 AM

"My thoughts of you take their place
upon clouds of Angel's grace
now darkened by empty's touch
where rain once fed dreams of such"

Your words are so smooth...loved that stanza.

"sit on top of the world and tell me how you feel...'cause what you feel is what I feel for you.."
~Dido~

Kahlil
Senior Member

since 2003-04-12

Posts 1881

9 posted 2004-01-27 09:25 AM

I love the motion and emotion of this write. What a fabulous job you have done combining images and feelings. It's a keeper. ~K~

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