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Mad About You
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Mad About You |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
Somehow it is that my books are filled with pages of you and agonies but it doesn’t matter anymore I did not give way to those things that would crush my spirit So while I hurt and ache and grieve and count my bruises I acknowledge what is good about me and worth keeping Something stopped me from giving it all away It wasn’t easy as I plodded along from day to day calling out weak and fearful pleas for guidance Somehow I held myself up and now my life has changed No longer will I cling to the things that kept me stuck closed untouchable unreachable I know what to give myself and you can’t have it |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You have come to the best conclusion. Indeed we can't possess each other anyway. We can just love. Very nicely sad. Love, Margherita  |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Such wisdom...I'm impressed. Thanks for posting this lovely. ~Sadelite~ |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
*Applause* ~you can never have too much strength~ |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Bravo!! I bow to your brave stand. Well written piece. hugs, Chris "At one glance |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Yay! As they say, "True happiness comes from you!" and begins there, and there you can spread happiness from your smile! (big angel hugs) We can all love one another but it doesn't mean we can possess one another, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Rubillam, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you But if the bright lights don't receive you You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20 |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Well done |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
It sounds as if you've balanced everything out and are comfortable with your decision, and that should give you added strength. peaceful wishes for you |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Kahlil - your thoughts are well said in this writing... BC |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
excellent! |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Very good, Kahlil! This shows a great deal of courage and strength -- well expressed. |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
Thanks everyone. Whew! I made it! ~K~ |
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