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Euphemism (Duet RVW & TD)
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Euphemism (Duet RVW & TD) |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
From a balcony of dreams that never rest the changing guard of time Heaven splits before thee, into colored swells wailed haunting chime To forge forgiving walls sent skyward, passages that proudly rise before the sun Without a hammer or a saw to see the cut and rubble blooms forever to be won To foster dawn, bequeathed in brush of gentle change and rock to rivers With hands by two, the past laid waste a revelation arrows bright in quivers To seek thy cast before thy endearing swells of favored overcast My past seeketh the laden foundations before this rainbows pass. To impart my fortunes upon the everlasting fortification to my ascending destiny And plum the deliverance of the fortitude and grandeur of the coming sanctity To seek out thy souls whisper to discern thy rights from thy wrongs There shall be no shadows to persevere over thine beating hearts song. Thy skies exhibit elements set least and lingered pulse so proud Excavated from the catacombs a song so hailed and blessed out loud Was a song that reined from a coming of virtues by summoned spirits of a noble past That dispelled the wrongful deeds and commuted man's spirit from evils crusading wrath Then by two as by one the best is done, in castles risen to the sun. I dedicated my will and obedience eternally to both the father and the son. Copyright Ravenwolfvoyager/ThisDiamond 1/24/04 |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kathleen & Jeff~ This is a beautiful blending of spirited thoughts~ A treasure to keep~ WONDERFUL you two~  *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (tears fall down my cheeks) God Bless You, my both, my Cherokee ancestors and friends will be deeply humbled by these deep wods, as obviously many can't begin to delve the euphemisms of the tears and angst so many felt through exodus and silence and this is a compassionate velvet glove poem that can relate to many! (big angel hugs) Yay, I love this, we all love you both so much! You have such beautiful hearts, sweet Kathleen and Ravenwolfvoyager, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you both! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you But if the bright lights don't receive you You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20 |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Humbly I thank you for reading. This post is offered in joyful celebration... and I am honored to write by the side of the noble Ravenwolfvoyager...a poet of merit and a delightful man. TD |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You are beautiful souls and poets. Love, Margherita |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Kathleen and Jeff, this is beautiful!!!! You both know that I am a very big fan of each of you, and I have got to keep this one. I hope you don't mind. By the way, with most duets I can tell who writes which part, but this blended so perfectly that I couldn't just from reading it. I would have to study it. LOL I think I'll just enjoy it as is. LOL Thank you both for sharing this masterpiesce with us!! And hugs to you both, Ethel |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice duet  |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
Loved this! stunning. Jason |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Beautifully done, well done to you both... |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
TD and RWV...I am not surprised that you duet so well. Wonderful meld of two wonderful writers, much enjoyed! |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
wonderful! wow you two.... I lie awake at night |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
ThisDiamond - ok you two, youse did well, very well indeed... BC |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
When two voices join so eloquently... 'tis more than a song, beautiful poetry |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Extremely well done you two! Please du-et again soon. Hugs~ In the midst of winter.. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
ThisDiamond Two good poets make for a super read, enjoyed |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Incredible, simply stunning. What a duo...a pairing of perfection! Patricia |
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Ravenwolfvoyager Member
since 2003-12-25
Posts 326 |
I wanted to thank everyone for the very kind remarks. I continually read each of your wonderful works and it is truly an honor and privledge to write before an audience of such gifted and noble poets. It also honors me to write beside the gifted and notable poet, This Diamond. Thank you Kathy. |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Kathleen & Jeff Thank you for combining your talents in order to delight us with your wonderful words. Take care........Sue I am in motion |
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jaicie114 Senior Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 750On the edge of forever |
TD & RWV... Absolutely beautiful and gracious work of stunning art. Thank you both. Love and Light...jc This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light. |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Holy Moly this was good! Anybody ever tell you two, that you have way with word...  Seriously, this was amazing! Great Job! Richy |
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