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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2004-01-24 02:13 PM





~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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iliana
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1 posted 2004-01-24 02:18 PM


I see this has been moved over to #31 so I'll post my reply again.  Marge, you are so special to share with us the beauty seen through your eyes and words.  Thanks so much for this lovely thought.     love ya, jo
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2 posted 2004-01-24 02:28 PM


I know I overuse the term beautiful... but this is just that. *S* You take me from the gray gloom of here... thank you! *S*
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3 posted 2004-01-24 02:35 PM


Marge, the girls and I are in consensus (rarely happens in this house)LOL. Chelsea, Macy, and I love this poem!  

Simply beautiful.

Patricia

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4 posted 2004-01-24 02:40 PM


oh, i needed this today...i big dose of colour...and light...
just so delightful to see this.

Dawn

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5 posted 2004-01-24 02:42 PM


Beautiful work Marge!!!
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6 posted 2004-01-24 02:47 PM


Just breathtaking!

McLean

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7 posted 2004-01-24 02:56 PM


You are a true poetic artist at work... you capture the spirit of nature. Kudos!
Love and peace, Maggie ((~.~))


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8 posted 2004-01-24 03:10 PM


Beautiful,,!!!
Martie
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9 posted 2004-01-24 04:04 PM


Sis....Sure is perddy!!!  
JamesMichael
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10 posted 2004-01-24 04:27 PM


Like this Marge...James
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11 posted 2004-01-24 04:51 PM


This was a very pretty poem

~chelsea~

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12 posted 2004-01-24 05:00 PM


"...that gleams from loving eye."
You captured the completeness in one line.
It is the beauty as great as we perceive.
Enjoyed.
TD

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13 posted 2004-01-24 05:05 PM


Marge,

What can I say when it has already been said except "Beautiful".

SG

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14 posted 2004-01-24 05:10 PM


As beautiful as your smile, where your soul shines, dear Marge.
Love and hugs.  Margherita

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15 posted 2004-01-24 05:26 PM


Dear Marge,
This is really beautiful. I very much enjoyed it.
Barb

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16 posted 2004-01-24 05:41 PM


Dear Marge:  Thanks for sharing your lovely photos with us.  It's nice to know there are places not buried under snow.  Gorgeous colors in that sunset and your poem does it justice.

Love
Betty Lou

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17 posted 2004-01-24 06:22 PM


Marge,
  This is a truly beautiful poem.

Cold hands means a warm heart

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18 posted 2004-01-24 06:57 PM


looks like God poured  Fruit Punch into the sky! enjoyed this very much
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19 posted 2004-01-24 07:04 PM


yes, I enjoyed this again too
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20 posted 2004-01-24 07:05 PM


Beautiful as always dear lady

hugs
Charisma

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you are truly astounding
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22 posted 2004-01-25 02:47 AM



Lovely, Marge... both picture and words...
Hugs,
~Vicky

"When the power of love overcomes the love
of power the world will know peace."
--Jimi Hendrix

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23 posted 2004-01-25 05:06 AM


I wrote a poem upon this same picture.
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Laoha's Pen

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24 posted 2004-01-25 08:27 AM


Marge - lovely write set on a graphic. You do these well...

BC

Marge Tindal
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25 posted 2004-01-26 11:04 AM


How greatly I appreciate your acceptance of these little pieces of my heart~

My thanks to you ALL from one gratefully gracious poetess~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

noles1@totcon.com

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26 posted 2004-01-26 06:39 PM


So nicely done.  Sorry I missed this before.  Love, Joyce
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27 posted 2004-01-27 01:49 AM


Marge
Breathtaking as always.
Astounding & Amazing.

Garfield

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