From twilight to dusk her heart seduces Through the windows of a delicate soul Those haunted eyes, whispering a forsaken lullaby An abyss of bittersweet, concrete, memories Intoxicating all who surround her frigid façade With beautifully induced words not meant to allure She captures you without one thought Stealing you away like a fluttering scarlet carousel Attracting your attention in your move of a fatal distraction…
"I pray thee, O God, that I may be beautiful within." –Socrates @-->---
hmmm...I really need to think about this one to comprehend exactly what it is your trying to get across. And after i do i am in shock at the depth. I find that as i look at more and more of your poetry, i really admire the creative mind you were given. Your poetry really does have to be taken seriously both as a poem, and as a piece of soul. Exelent poem, ~Tempest~
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This one is slightly different then your usual style, but again ... refreshing. I admire you Stargal. Different works for you, when most ppl try to break away from the usual ''accepted style'' they seem as tho they are trying to hard. You are one of a kind, and an amazing poet.
Much love, Michelle
*I love him oh yes I do, he's for me and not for you, and if by chance you take my place, I'll take my fist and smash your face!*