wow, im really sorry. I liked this poem, i think maybe you tried a little TOO hard to make it rhyme, and my advice: poetry does NOT have to flow perfectly! just say what you feel, exactly, and try to just let it out w/o making it be too perfect. it was a really really good poem though, i really liked it. and again, im sorry. muchos amo amigo -missy
Hey, i'm new to pip but i think that your poem was awesome. really good i don't know why but i had to keep reading it over and over and i don't know why. thanks for posting it, it was awesome. always lea
This is a very poignant poem in that it shows, we are closer to each other than we realize. Sometimes we just don't know that someone could understand what we have been through, until the similarities surface. Well done!
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