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Deja` Vu

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rhia_5779
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since 06-09-2006
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California


0 posted 08-31-2006 04:23 AM       View Profile for rhia_5779   Email rhia_5779   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for rhia_5779

what shoud of been triumph,turned disaster
I am not sure who was  madder
at how it had ended
without us still friends

that you really thought you'd get away with it all
really gets me,you didn't realize someday you'd fall
if you lie, thats sure to bring you down
you sure lied,and you hit the ground

by the end most of us hated you
for each excuse, we all still knew
your greatest mistake was that  you kept trying
to hurt us, and truthfully you never stopped crying

after all I went through
should a smiled,when I saw you
fall so fast,you lost your place
as coolest, you got your fate

but as we all watched
even as I got what I sought
I realized what was happening to you
another time,another place, Deja Vu

you had put Me through all this
turned my world upside down, and missed
when you aimed for my pride
cause I still had faith inside

everything we put you through
another time, another place, It was all Deja Vu.
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buttercupbaby
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outside in the rain


1 posted 08-31-2006 06:23 PM       View Profile for buttercupbaby   Email buttercupbaby   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for buttercupbaby

wow, crazy, but i wrote a poem almost just like that!!!! lol, i had the same thing "da ja vu" as the thing, so that makes me like this!!
lol.
very nice write rhia
-missy
rhia_5779
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2 posted 09-01-2006 03:00 AM       View Profile for rhia_5779   Email rhia_5779   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for rhia_5779

i dont think i ever saw urs, cause i got the idea when i was up in the mountains. and i was upset about drama with my friend.
buttercupbaby
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3 posted 09-02-2006 02:55 PM       View Profile for buttercupbaby   Email buttercupbaby   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for buttercupbaby

oh, lets see, mine was a long time ago, so im not suprised you didn't see it. but i have to say, i think i like yours better than mine!
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