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Tears and hate

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rhia_5779
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since 06-09-2006
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0 posted 08-31-2006 04:16 AM       View Profile for rhia_5779   Email rhia_5779   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for rhia_5779


feeling hot tears run down my face
where does it come from, these tears and hate
here one moment and gone the next
I succumb to both,I'll break and bend

the hot fury,that rarely claims me
my wet tears,blurring my sight,hard to see
this anger flares up in hot bursts
tears stain my cheeks giving me away the worst


how can it all be here,these emotions
my hystericcs, exploding in a big explosion
but when I am left to recompense
by the time that I finally see sense

my anger has managed to slink away
my pain still there,after my fury fades
I leave myself broken and in tears
without a flame inside, I face my fears

adressing each,one by one,till
I can't handle anymore,had my fill
I yell, I scream,voices shout in my ears
then a few words,heartfelt,bring me to tears

the most complicated are tears and hate
I'll never understand why they can't go away
one leaves you in an emotional wreck
rarely helps,te other just makes a mess

between these two fellings, a challenge in life
to keep them from destroying me,interesting fight
won't be easy at all, nor that new
well, I'll endure,I always do.
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mgoodman1989
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since 03-05-2006
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1 posted 09-03-2006 12:36 PM       View Profile for mgoodman1989   Email mgoodman1989   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mgoodman1989

Boosting because I hate to see a poem go un-noticed.


Great write Rhia, I liked it!


Much love,
Michelle
cherrys_rule
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since 03-18-2006
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2 posted 09-04-2006 04:42 PM       View Profile for cherrys_rule   Email cherrys_rule   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for cherrys_rule

I really like this one, Thanks for sharing. I hope to see more from you lata in the future.
             ~Courtney~
secret_truth_lies
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3 posted 12-25-2006 11:56 AM       View Profile for secret_truth_lies   Email secret_truth_lies   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for secret_truth_lies

This is a wonderful piece. I hope to read more of you work here soon. Happy Holidays
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