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Okay, I'm not really sure what to tell you on the lyrics of this song - reason being is that I have no melody to go with. I know that as a whole I liked the words, probably need to think about adding more verses, but what you have now is a great start.
The chorus would have to be my favorite though; Although, the last line in that kind of loses the flow of the rest of the song, if ya know what I mean? Yet, that's just my opinion, wait until you see what others say before you go on anything I say! lol
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"I pray thee, O God, that I
may be beautiful within."