Awesome poem! Reminds me a lot of a rap, but I'm listening to rap right now so could that be something? I liked this one a lot- The general subject was very good- I liked how it flows so well.
"I’m just a girl
who likes to be seen
who understands who they are
and where they stand"
I loved this part especially, maybe it's cause I wish I felt like this? lol
Great job and thanks for sharing!
"I pray thee, O God, that I
may be beautiful within."