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Secret Friends

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nostalgic*pride
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0 posted 08-28-2006 07:57 PM       View Profile for nostalgic*pride   Email nostalgic*pride   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for nostalgic*pride

We’re only friends when it’s convenient
And you find the time
You must think I’m stupid
But, Hun, I’m not blind

I know you’ve got your own thing
Different desires in your heart
Still you refuse to just tell me
That we’ve grown apart

And it’s hard to believe
Because we were such great friends
Now everything’s broken
And the wounds just wont mend

Yeah, I’ve heard all the rumors
And dodged all the lies
And yet neither one of us
Is breaking our ties

So until that day comes
When we acknowledge the truth
No more than ‘secret friends’
Is what I’ll be with you

© Copyright 2006 Haley May - All Rights Reserved
the_girl_next_door
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1 posted 08-28-2006 10:08 PM       View Profile for the_girl_next_door   Email the_girl_next_door   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for the_girl_next_door

Wow.. I really liked this.. I love how you started this of.. Great job..

~heather`

Desire nothing except desirelessness. Hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes.
Want nothing & you will have everything.

hunnie_girl
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2 posted 08-28-2006 11:34 PM       View Profile for hunnie_girl   Email hunnie_girl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for hunnie_girl

So until that day comes
When we acknowledge the truth
No more than ‘secret friends’
Is what I’ll be with you

i liked this stanza a lot
wow this poem was really good... good write...
hunnie*

A true friend is someone who reaches for your hand and touches your
heart.

rhia_5779
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3 posted 08-29-2006 10:30 AM       View Profile for rhia_5779   Email rhia_5779   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for rhia_5779

that just blew me away that it so good, and i can totally relate.

rhia
stargal
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4 posted 08-30-2006 08:56 AM       View Profile for stargal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for stargal

Wow!~ That's like all I can say about this poem, it's such a mind-boggler for me to read, cause I've been in "friendships" like this...

I think you described it just right...

Thanks for sharing

"I pray thee, O God, that I
may be beautiful within."
–Socrates
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rebel~angel
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5 posted 08-30-2006 10:21 PM       View Profile for rebel~angel   Email rebel~angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for rebel~angel

And it’s hard to believe
Because we were such great friends
Now everything’s broken
And the wounds just wont mend

I love this.  It really describes my life right now...really good.

Remember:Tuck your chin, you're going to get hurt, so expect it and be ready. You might as well see it coming.
-Elizabeth Haydon, Requiem for the Sun

patience_iago
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6 posted 08-30-2006 11:35 PM       View Profile for patience_iago   Email patience_iago   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for patience_iago

Isnt this true for every teenage girl it seems.

"There are some days where i believe i might die of an overdose of satisfaction"
-Dali

*Alli4000*
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7 posted 09-03-2006 07:57 PM       View Profile for *Alli4000*   Email *Alli4000*   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for *Alli4000*

Ha, yes, like every other teenage girl out there, I can really relate to this poem.
Actually, the first poem I ever wrote was about this type of thing happening to me, but I think your poem definately came out better, LOL.

~Alli~
MY_ZACHARY
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8 posted 09-02-2007 04:08 PM       View Profile for MY_ZACHARY   Email MY_ZACHARY   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for MY_ZACHARY

Wow! This is amazing! I recentlly did work like this and I love it! Keep up the good work!
nicole leigh
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9 posted 10-03-2007 06:12 PM       View Profile for nicole leigh   Email nicole leigh   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for nicole leigh

wow i luv dis poem u is rly good!

NIKKI  

 
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