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cherrys_rule Member
since 2006-03-18
Posts 442 |
I found that box of letters, lying on the ground. The ones that you used to write me, before it all went down. I even got a paper cut trying to figure out what to do with all these memories. But all i did was pout. I saw the picture when you "climbed that tree." Then I found the X-ray, when it shows that you broke your knee. I loved being with you. It seemed that everything came true. It was like I was living in a fairy tale. Something that could never fail. I even dreamt of another you, the one who would never, just leave me a letter. (that you wrote in 2004) I know it wasn't your fault, the dude that killed you in the car accident was in a cult. I don't hate him, but neither do I like him. I know he must hate himself for what he did. When I hear that you died that night, I thought everything I heard was just a huge fib. I didn't want to believe any of the things they had said. It just made me even more sad. That day, that moment, I was on the phone with you. But then that car had hit you, everything me and you went through had quickly went by. Just as quick of a wink of an eye. I know this is kindda late, but I never got to tell you over the phone. I love you, and good bye. Dedicated to Dannny Bennet Died from car hitting him December 14th 1988-August 30th 2004 |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
awwww i'm sorry for your loss.... i really felt the emotion in this poem. hope your feeling better... hunnie* A true friend is someone who reaches for your hand and touches your |
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cherrys_rule Member
since 2006-03-18
Posts 442 |
Thanks... since it the accident happened a couple yearss ago yeah I have almost gotten over the situation, but then again i don't want to for some reason. He was a played a BIG role in my life and I never wanted that to happen to one of my good friends. But it did, and i can't take back time. So yeah that's all I really had to say. |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Aw, such an emotional poem you have written. I'm sad to hear that this poem is based on a true experience. Hope you are ok.  |
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cherrys_rule Member
since 2006-03-18
Posts 442 |
Thank you for your concern. But I'm a little better then I was. I mean it was terrifying to me when I had heard everything on the phone. But I have to try to get over it, and writing this got alot of my emotions off of it. |
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secret_truth_lies Member
since 2006-11-14
Posts 74 |
Man Courtney, I didn't know you felt this way. I Know his death was long ago, but I know deep down you're still hurt. You know I'm always there for ya chica. I wuv ya like my own sista. I'll be there to lend you a shoulder to cry on when you need one. |
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Harmful_If_Swallowed New Member
since 2007-03-30
Posts 1 |
Umm.... the beginging of your poem is actually from a song by Lindsay Lohan called "Black Hole". Thats stealing... |
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cherrys_rule Member
since 2006-03-18
Posts 442 |
oh I didn't know, by the way who is Lindsay Lohan. i was just thinking of a begining. I didn't know honestly. That's weird. Kind of creepy if you ask me. Is she a singer or just a band name. |
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