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cherrys_rule
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0 posted 08-28-2006 06:57 PM       View Profile for cherrys_rule   Email cherrys_rule   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for cherrys_rule


I found that box of letters,
lying on the ground.
The ones that you used to write me,
before it all went down.
I even got a paper cut trying to figure out
what to do with all these memories.
But all i did was pout.
I saw the picture when you "climbed that tree."
Then I found the X-ray, when it shows that you broke your knee.
I loved being with you.
It seemed that everything came true.
It was like I was living in a fairy tale.
Something that could never fail.
I even dreamt of another you,
the one who would never, just leave me a letter.
(that you wrote in 2004)
I know it wasn't your fault,
the dude that killed you in the car accident was in a cult.
I don't hate him,
but neither do I like him.
I know he must hate himself for what he did.
When I hear that you died that night,
I thought everything I heard was just a huge fib.
I didn't want to believe any of the things they had said.
It just made me even more sad.
That day, that moment,
I was on the phone with you.
But then that car had hit you,
everything me and you went through had quickly went by.
Just as quick of a wink of an eye.
I know this is kindda late,
but I never got to tell you over the phone.
I love you, and good bye.


                      Dedicated to Dannny Bennet
                      Died from car hitting him
               December 14th 1988-August 30th 2004
© Copyright 2006 cherrys_rule - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 08-28-2006 11:55 PM       View Profile for hunnie_girl   Email hunnie_girl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for hunnie_girl

awwww i'm sorry for your loss.... i really felt the emotion in this poem. hope your feeling better...
hunnie*

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2 posted 08-30-2006 08:03 PM       View Profile for cherrys_rule   Email cherrys_rule   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for cherrys_rule

Thanks... since it the accident happened a couple yearss ago yeah I have almost gotten over the situation, but then again i don't want to for some reason. He was a played a BIG role in my life and I never wanted that to happen to one of my good friends. But it did, and i can't take back time. So yeah that's all I really had to say.
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3 posted 08-31-2006 12:00 AM       View Profile for *Alli4000*   Email *Alli4000*   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for *Alli4000*

Aw, such an emotional poem you have written.  I'm sad to hear that this poem is based on a true experience.  Hope you are ok.

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4 posted 09-03-2006 09:52 AM       View Profile for cherrys_rule   Email cherrys_rule   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for cherrys_rule

Thank you for your concern. But I'm a little better then I was. I mean it was terrifying to me when I had heard everything on the phone. But I have to try to get over it, and writing this got alot of my emotions off of it.
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5 posted 12-29-2006 08:12 PM       View Profile for secret_truth_lies   Email secret_truth_lies   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for secret_truth_lies

Man Courtney, I didn't know you felt this way. I Know his death was long ago, but I know deep down you're still hurt. You know I'm always there for ya chica. I wuv ya like my own sista. I'll be there to lend you a shoulder to cry on when you need one.
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6 posted 03-30-2007 08:43 AM       View Profile for Harmful_If_Swallowed   Email Harmful_If_Swallowed   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for Harmful_If_Swallowed

Umm.... the beginging of your poem is actually from a song by Lindsay Lohan called "Black Hole". Thats stealing...
cherrys_rule
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7 posted 04-15-2007 06:22 PM       View Profile for cherrys_rule   Email cherrys_rule   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for cherrys_rule

oh I didn't know, by the way who is Lindsay Lohan. i was just thinking of a begining. I didn't know honestly. That's weird. Kind of creepy if you ask me. Is she a singer or just a band name.  
 
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