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Succesful Hurter

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buttercupbaby
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outside in the rain


0 posted 08-28-2006 01:31 PM       View Profile for buttercupbaby   Email buttercupbaby   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for buttercupbaby


i just realized
what we had was fake
when you said "i love you baby"
it was for your boredom's sake.


you had not had fun]
in oh so very long a while
and innocent me you saw
and fufilled your thoughts, though vile.


poor me, i think now
sad and hurt
realizing now though i don't want to
you were such a jerk.


you hurt my very gut
not to mention broke my heart
i thought you loved me, and i loved you back
from the very start


but it was a lie
just like you
i never though i'd say this
but i never had a clue


i though i was in love, finally too.
and you knew you were succesfully tricking me
you knew it, didn't you?
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the_girl_next_door
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1 posted 08-28-2006 10:18 PM       View Profile for the_girl_next_door   Email the_girl_next_door   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for the_girl_next_door

I really like this.. so many girls can probably relate to the kind of guy that is munipulative.. great write..

~heather~

Desire nothing except desirelessness. Hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes.
Want nothing & you will have everything.

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2 posted 08-29-2006 12:03 AM       View Profile for hunnie_girl   Email hunnie_girl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for hunnie_girl

i can relate to this in a way... but i liked this it made sense to write it and the title drew me in good post...
hunnie*

A true friend is someone who reaches for your hand and touches your
heart.

buttercupbaby
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3 posted 08-30-2006 09:21 AM       View Profile for buttercupbaby   Email buttercupbaby   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for buttercupbaby

thank you heather & hunnie! i am really glad y'all replied.
-missy
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4 posted 08-31-2006 12:03 AM       View Profile for *Alli4000*   Email *Alli4000*   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for *Alli4000*

Yes, I agree that many girls can relate to this -- I know I can!  Keep writing, I enjoyed this.

~Alli~
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5 posted 08-31-2006 06:26 PM       View Profile for buttercupbaby   Email buttercupbaby   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for buttercupbaby

thanks alot alli=)
 
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