outside in the rain
thank you heather, rhia, and stargal!
wow stargal, im really suprised! i didn't think it was one of my best, but i tried hard on this one [a wee bit more] to rhyme all the way through the poem, and tried to make it flow a little bit more. it just kinda came to me[realizing] that i never knew who to love. and i wished someone would come to me one day, which would be waiting. then i had all those words and decided to use them!
thanks alot y'all, i really like replies!
muchos amo amigos