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synthetic
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ontario, canada


0 posted 08-28-2006 01:02 AM       View Profile for synthetic   Email synthetic   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for synthetic

Women feeling insecure 'bout their minds, bodies and faces
the media stands like the Nazis, and them multiple Jew races.
By saying that does it make me racist?
Because I'm a poet behind an alias does that make me faceless?
I believe every religion has an element of truth,
would that mean my beliefs are misconstrued?
Who's right who's wrong, who stands to be correct?
And if so how long will that good be in effect?
Cuz life is full of changes,
high and lows switching places,
and evil like the Thriller Man keeps switching faces.
Man I don't really know one single thing,
except that I don't really know one single thing.
I need a library of universal truths,
and unlike the corporate world to be put to good use.
Would you believe that affirmative action
was so that as they keep scheming blacks keep relaxing?
I hope you know equal rights between men and women is never gonna happen,
you'll only get superficial roles handing out royal sanctions.
Try and ask for a famous women's name they'll be like who's asking.
Unless of course it's a media celebrity
like Paris Hilton, Jada or another from the hills of Beverly.
Knock knock, who's there?
Pamela's pair
of gigantic boobies
ya I did touch 'em sue me!

The world is seriously in grave peril,
we live our lives trying to make due for our next bill.
Kids trying to learn thinking about buying houses and cars,
how many sons, how many daughters, a cat or a dog.
You need to slow 'em down, give 'em direction,
strip away the word perfection,
and stamp down be the best you can be.
Forget about outter critics, what do I think about me.
The American government's a horrible joke,
can't help but look at Bush and ask yourself what else did he smoke?
The war in the Middle East is never gonna end
until war ceises to stand as profitable means to an end.
We've watched the lives of so many innocent end,
yet instead of advertising peace and share, tv's saying spend spend spend.
Man I'm so damn sick of this world,
makes me wanna drink til' my head spins and my pains fade in twirls.
Oh God, if you exist please help me
the corruption in this world is making me unhealthy.
Send me a saviour.

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the_girl_next_door
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since 02-26-2006
Posts 590
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1 posted 08-28-2006 10:35 PM       View Profile for the_girl_next_door   Email the_girl_next_door   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for the_girl_next_door

WOW!!! I believe in God and what the Bible says.. and yes. I have thought about these things too.. I love the whole thing.. It really makes a person think and the title just gives it a little extra. Great job.. this is something that's really hard to post bc you're scared of what people will say.. but I am glad you had the courage to stand up for what you believe in..

out of the whole poem. I had one (1) favorite line..

"Who's right who's wrong, who stands to be correct?"

it just kinda outstates the whole poem and like sums it up all in one line.. fantastic job..

I hope you get more post on this one.. since i'm going to *bump* it back up to the top maybe you will

~heather~

Desire nothing except desirelessness. Hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes.
Want nothing & you will have everything.

hunnie_girl
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since 06-18-2006
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2 posted 08-28-2006 11:39 PM       View Profile for hunnie_girl   Email hunnie_girl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for hunnie_girl

Who's right who's wrong, who stands to be correct?
And if so how long will that good be in effect?

wow that was so unbelivable i liked this..... i don't know what else to say...
hunnie*

A true friend is someone who reaches for your hand and touches your
heart.

mad_about_you
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since 07-24-2006
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3 posted 08-31-2006 12:53 AM       View Profile for mad_about_you   Email mad_about_you   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for mad_about_you

awesome poem..thats all i'm gonna say. it talks about too many different interesting aspects to pick it apart. Very interesting and covered alot of ground..also very daring to put it up here..good job
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