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Friends don't come first anyway
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Friends don't come first anyway |
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pen&paper Senior Member
since 2006-06-06
Posts 513
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If that’s how it’s gonna be.. Say hello to your boy-toy And good-bye to me. I don’t care what you say According to you Friends don’t come first anyway It’s not fair, I know Just wait til it happens to you Your best friend does it to you “That’ll never happen to me.” Yeah, That’s what I said too. Why do you do this to me? Stick up for only your boy-toy? What happened to “friends come first”? First to last And now best to worst. To you I’m last season’s fashion And last year’s makeup trend Well to me your friendship’s at an end It’s not fair, I know Just wait til it happens to you Your best friend does it to you “That’ll never happen to me.” Yeah, That’s what I said too. I don’t care what you say According to you Friends don’t come first anyway |
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mgoodman1989 Member
since 2006-03-05
Posts 93Iowa, USA |
I know how you feel. Because not to long ago I had a friend act the same way, but after looking back, I see I was just over reacting, maybe u'll see that too... |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
I don’t care what you say According to you Friends don’t come first anyway i really liked this stanza... i liked this poem a lot it had a nice flow and i could relate too...good write... hunnie* A true friend is someone who reaches for your hand and touches your |
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cherrys_rule Member
since 2006-03-18
Posts 442 |
Whoa man I know what you feel right now, only b/c that's what I'm going through. She just had her 2 month anniversary with him this week and We haven't even got anytime to spend w/ eachother. When ever she does come over she just wants to be on the phone with him. I mean yeah i might be over reacting, but ppl don't know what it feels like to be ignored like I did when she was over. It seemed to me that she has to be with him 24.7. But i don't know. I just know what you are going through and I like this poem alot. Thanks for sharing with us. |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
I can really relate to this poem by you. Nice job, keep posting!  ~Alli~ |
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yvetters_24 Member
since 2006-08-27
Posts 52california |
i really like this but i dont really relate but i no oneof my friends does and yeah this is really kwel |
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patience_iago Member
since 2006-08-30
Posts 54 |
I love the title of this. "There are some days where i believe i might die of an overdose of satisfaction" |
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