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Friends don't come first anyway

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pen&paper
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0 posted 08-27-2006 04:09 PM       View Profile for pen&paper   Email pen&paper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for pen&paper


If thatís how itís gonna be..
Say hello to your boy-toy
And good-bye to me.
I donít care what you say
According to you
Friends donít come first anyway

Itís not fair, I know
Just wait til it happens to you
Your best friend does it to you
ďThatíll never happen to me.Ē
Yeah, Thatís what I said too.

Why do you do this to me?
Stick up for only your boy-toy?
What happened to ďfriends come firstĒ?
First to last
And now best to worst.

To you Iím last seasonís fashion
And last yearís makeup trend
Well to me your friendshipís at an end

Itís not fair, I know
Just wait til it happens to you
Your best friend does it to you
ďThatíll never happen to me.Ē
Yeah, Thatís what I said too.

I donít care what you say
According to you
Friends donít come first anyway
© Copyright 2006 Cierra L. Robbeloth - All Rights Reserved
mgoodman1989
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1 posted 08-27-2006 07:06 PM       View Profile for mgoodman1989   Email mgoodman1989   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mgoodman1989

I know how you feel. Because not to long ago I had a friend act the same way, but after looking back, I see I was just over reacting, maybe u'll see that too...
hunnie_girl
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2 posted 08-28-2006 11:50 PM       View Profile for hunnie_girl   Email hunnie_girl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for hunnie_girl

I donít care what you say
According to you
Friends donít come first anyway

i really liked this stanza... i liked this poem a lot it had a nice flow and i could relate too...good write...
hunnie*

A true friend is someone who reaches for your hand and touches your
heart.

cherrys_rule
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3 posted 08-30-2006 08:09 PM       View Profile for cherrys_rule   Email cherrys_rule   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for cherrys_rule

Whoa man I know what you feel right now, only b/c that's what I'm going through. She just had her 2 month anniversary with him this week and We haven't even got anytime to spend w/ eachother. When ever she does come over she just wants to be on the phone with him. I mean yeah i might be over reacting, but ppl don't know what it feels like to be ignored like I did when she was over. It seemed to me that she has to be with him 24.7. But i don't know. I just know what you are going through and I like this poem alot. Thanks for sharing with us.
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4 posted 08-31-2006 12:07 AM       View Profile for *Alli4000*   Email *Alli4000*   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for *Alli4000*

I can really relate to this poem by you.  Nice job, keep posting!

~Alli~
yvetters_24
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5 posted 08-31-2006 11:47 AM       View Profile for yvetters_24   Email yvetters_24   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for yvetters_24

i really like this but i dont really relate but i no oneof my friends does and yeah this is really kwel
patience_iago
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6 posted 09-03-2006 08:29 PM       View Profile for patience_iago   Email patience_iago   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for patience_iago

I love the title of this.

"There are some days where i believe i might die of an overdose of satisfaction"
-Dali

 
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