WElcome to piptalk!~ Awesome first post, ya know? I like this kind of poem, it tells how you are down, feeling weak, at first, and than it kind of builds you up, you find yourself. It's a very encouraging kind of poem, at least to me...
Anyways, like I said welcome, I hope you enjoy the site. I'll be looking forward to reading more of your work, until than, thanks for sharing
"I pray thee, O God, that I
may be beautiful within."