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Not to much to say, cause none of it matters

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buttercupbaby
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since 05-03-2006
Posts 399
outside in the rain


0 posted 08-26-2006 10:05 PM       View Profile for buttercupbaby   Email buttercupbaby   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for buttercupbaby

i just realized
im a foolish little girl
with big dreams
and too small of a heart
for others, not caring except for me.

i care only about myself
all the time
day and night
not caring about others
i wish i had known so we wouldn't fight

im sorry
i really am
i know i say that too much
that it doesn't even matter now
you really don't care what i say

you said that once to me
"so is everything else you say
you say it just to say it"
and i realize now you're right
i was so wrong before

i wish i could ask forgivness
but i cant
can i?
because you won't believe me
what a mess im in right now.

is there any way you would believe me?
no, no there isn't
you've left me behind
with oh so much to fix
but nothing can be fixed
without your approval

come back to me
please help me once more
im nothing without yuo
just pieces on the floor
waiting to be swept up

and thrown in the garbage
where i belong.
pick me up
save them the trip
take me to the trash
and again, dump me there.

so once more
just in case
before im with things like me
such as thrown at rotten things
im sorry.
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the_girl_next_door
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since 02-26-2006
Posts 590
USA


1 posted 08-26-2006 11:05 PM       View Profile for the_girl_next_door   Email the_girl_next_door   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for the_girl_next_door

I really enjoyed this.. it started off really good. it was a little little bit confusing in one area like it went off subject and then back on but it was really good.

~heather`

Desire nothing except desirelessness. Hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes.
Want nothing & you will have everything.

nina1522
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since 02-14-2009
Posts 189


2 posted 02-14-2009 09:20 PM       View Profile for nina1522   Email nina1522   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nina1522

a truly good piece. i can deffinately relate to it. good job
 
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