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those bright lights (everything reflected in your eyes)

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electricxheart
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far away from home.


0 posted 08-26-2006 11:37 AM       View Profile for electricxheart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for electricxheart


tired eyes
searching for yours
throughout those bright, bright lights
we donít know who we are tonight
we donít know who we can be if you
just let this feel right
any chances
any second chances would be nice
for a change
let me know this is more, this is more
aside from those mind games
that iím done playing
iím so over those nights of
faith and trust and beautiful love
we could have made it anywhere
take me, break me
my feelings would still remain the same
electric currents flowing throughout my veins
whisper to me what makes you feel alive
in times like these, all i can do is try
yeah, all i can do is try and try and try
for you to understand why
iím still standing here,
open and bruised
still believing in you, always believing
i canít stop believing in faith and trust and beautiful love
that you confessed to me so many times before
and iím dancing all around
all over this floor
with all these people closing in
and youíre swaying next to me, i can always hear you breathing
heavy and steady and everything in between
please tell me what you mean, when you say
things like these arenít as they seem
because all i felt was you and me
connected, and i never looked away
i never decided to give up on this fight
we donít know who we are tonight
we donít know who we can be if you
just let this feel right
any chances
any second chances would be nice
for a change
iíll be waiting here,
iíll be waiting
till you decide to call out my name
iíll be waiting here,
iíll be waiting
my feelings would still remain the same
electric currents flowing throughout my veins
whisper to me what makes you feel alive
in times like these, all i can do is try
try and try and tryÖ
© Copyright 2006 Kelly Landis - All Rights Reserved
mgoodman1989
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since 03-05-2006
Posts 93
Iowa, USA


1 posted 08-26-2006 06:10 PM       View Profile for mgoodman1989   Email mgoodman1989   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mgoodman1989

Oh wow, this was amazing!!! Haven't read much by you, but your definately going into my library!!!

Can totally relate!

Much love,
Michelle
mgoodman1989
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since 03-05-2006
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Iowa, USA


2 posted 08-26-2006 06:10 PM       View Profile for mgoodman1989   Email mgoodman1989   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mgoodman1989

Oh wow, this was amazing!!! Haven't read much by you, but your definately going into my library!!!

Can totally relate!

Much love,
Michelle


*I love him oh yes I do, he's for me and not for you, and if by chance you take my place, I'll take my fist and smash your face!*
patience_iago
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since 08-30-2006
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3 posted 08-30-2006 11:36 PM       View Profile for patience_iago   Email patience_iago   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for patience_iago

"and iím dancing all around
all over this floor
with all these people closing in
and youíre swaying next to me, i can always hear you breathing
heavy and steady and everything in between"

I love that.

"There are some days where i believe i might die of an overdose of satisfaction"
-Dali

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4 posted 09-03-2006 07:57 PM       View Profile for *Alli4000*   Email *Alli4000*   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for *Alli4000*

I really enjoyed this poem by you!  Very nicely written.

~Alli~
 
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