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Holding on, Letting go

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buttercupbaby
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i always held on
to little things
you said to me
that would make me happy


but few they are
its hard to please
this broken heart with
i know, i've tried, trust me.


i almost wanna ask
for just one more nice word
but i realized now
no more should i hurt


you've had me where you've wanted me
so let me free
now, ok?
i promise it'll be better
for both of us,
so say goodbye, again, to me.
© Copyright 2006 Marisa F - All Rights Reserved
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WOW.

I love this....
buttercupbaby
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2 posted 08-25-2006 04:51 PM       View Profile for buttercupbaby   Email buttercupbaby   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for buttercupbaby

you do? thank you so much! i thought this was the worst of the other ones i just posted but i guess not! thanks alot SEA!

~missy
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truly, yes.

I understand the emotions of this...or can for sure relate it to my own.
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4 posted 08-26-2006 09:33 AM       View Profile for buttercupbaby   Email buttercupbaby   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for buttercupbaby

you are right, this is probably the strongest one when it comes to the emotions..
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5 posted 08-27-2006 12:20 AM       View Profile for hunnie_girl   Email hunnie_girl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for hunnie_girl

i liked this too a lot of emotion too good write
hunnie*

A true friend is someone who reaches for your hand and touches your
heart.

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thank you hunnie!
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wow.. this was amazing.. i loved it.. especially the end..

great great great write..

going in my library..

~Heather~

Desire nothing except desirelessness. Hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes.
Want nothing & you will have everything.

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thank you so much heather! im really glad y'all like it so much! i didn't expect such great replies!=)

muchos amo amigos
-missy<3
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Excellent, excellent write! I loved this one by you!

~Alli~
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beautifulllllllll...

"How are they the VICTIMS if they are the OCCUPIERS?!"
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