I think its great that you used Jojo's lyrics to "inspire" you, however it seemed as though you tried way to hard to be exactly like it. It was a nice write, but personally, not something that I would add to my library, because of its seemingly un-originality.
Sorry if it seems harsh in anyway, its just not one of my favorites.
Keep posting, I promise not to be so harsh on the next one
*I love him oh yes I do, he's for me and not for you, and if by chance you take my place, I'll take my fist and smash your face!*